The moment it started I thought this being some sort of Basshunter remix.
Otherwise I agree the synth being a bit too loud and the reason for missing stars I think it lacks a certain "impact" or a mindblower. Using some progressive cutoff on the main synth would sound nice imo. :)
This sh*t is dirtier than Justin Bieber's dislike list!
and you sneaked MGS alert sound in there too.
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